My Perfect Essay

My name is Jose Roberto García Miro and im 18 years old,     i  
consider my self a very compettive person that has very clear  
objectives in this world   and reach then by the cost it takes.
 
I would like to mention.  that i dont consider my self unic.    im  
just another person in this world that has his own goals      but  
having this idea clear        i know that if i dont figth and give my  
best,         no one would do it for me.
 
For my short age.   i have  learned and gained much experience in  
different aspects.    because of the life my destiny gave me    and i  
have no other choice than learn from this obstacules.
 
I would like to mention that actually im in second semester of  
college,   the name of my career is " international bussines".        
The purpose of this essay                is to get a chance to study  
in another country,        not for the fact of the actual situation in  
México.                    is beacuse.      i would like to get this  
life experience because it would help me on my life.          This  
posible interchange would help me also to learn another lenguages.      
so that way.   i could have more chances to be a succesful bussines  
man.       I also want you to know     that im very interested in this  
posible interchange.   by fact that in Munich.    its located the best  
bussines school in the world,     they are too many things that i  
could learn there      that it would be very difficult to learn them  
here in Mexico,             one example   besides of the lenguaje.    
is the lifestyle that they have,         you should question yourself  
wich is the relation between the lifestyle and the bussines,         
well when i finish my career     i want to get a Job in a very  
succesful company named Aurum Chemicals.      This company exports a  
lot of material to Germany,    so if i have  the lenguaje and  the  
lifestyle
 
i know that i  can do a lot of thigs for this company and for my  
life     With this posible interchange  . This are the main reasons  
for me to get a chance of studying in Germany,         hope you  
consider this      and give me the oportunity to have more tools       
for a very succesful life.